Hi Mackenstar, I love all the detail you put into your story about Harold. I felt like I was there again as I read it. Remember to think carefully about how you uses your capital letters and full stops. Keep up the awesome writing. From Mrs Carruthers
Hi Mackenstar, I love all the detail you put into your story about Harold. I felt like I was there again as I read it. Remember to think carefully about how you uses your capital letters and full stops. Keep up the awesome writing.
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